I’ve made it past 50k! Yes, I’ve written quite well tonight (1.6K). Chapter 17 is done and I’m happy.

Listeria really is a despickable person. I wonder if I didn’t push her too much in that session. We can see here all her loathing for her sister and the pleasure she takes in hurting her without seeming to. Now, my protagonist is placed in deep trouble that I will have to treat in the next chapter.

I had thought about resuming the wedding proposal thread now, but the conflict introduced by Listeria is too great, I need to show my protagonist’s reaction right now, so I don’t break the dramatic pressure of the last scene.

Romance will have to wait 🙂

 

I’m past half book, rejoice!

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