Started chapter 1. (“I’m indenting!”)
Got my thousand words today (count now at 4000). I’ve got some ideas down on paper, but they seem a little unordered. I’ll correct that tomorrow in the reading session, but for now, I think I conveyed the setup.
One little thought/fear : In my head, the setting is around 1920 technology-wise, but as the place is governed by pragmatic people (women), they already have a public transportation system. As the first scene takes place in a bus, all we see is that and I’m afraid I’m putting the reader in a SF mood, not a fantasy one.
We’ll tackle that in the rewrite, I think.
