I re-organised yesterday’s text. I think the end result is good.

Finished chapter 1 (count at 5300 words). Today’s part allowed me to introduce Onmk. He’s not at his best yet, but we get a good taste of his witty repartie.

Next is chapter 2. This is the first viewpoint for the bad guy who is reflecting on the events of the prologue. I’ll have to be specially attentive about info-dumps. This would be the perfect place to put some.

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